/oc/ - Original Creation

>>657
Yeah I thought they were a good starting point when I was tipping my toes into writing and they're still some of the most fun things to write imo.
Good luck with your writing nonna!

You know how to learn to draw, the best way is to start drawing still life from observation and work through fundamentals, construction etc? Cause if you just draw from imagination without learning, it still looks like shit. Is there any system like that in drawing for improving writing? Cause reading good literature doesn't automatically rub off on my writing, and when I try to write my own scenes they are capital S shit. They are Shit.

>>702
>They are Shit.
Do you understand why they are Shit or are you just being hard on yourself? What helps me with prose is not only reading "good" literature, but sometimes engaging with popular genre fiction that I know is mid/bad because it's easier to critique another person's work. For as long as I can stand to read I am thinking about why things are written the way they are and how I would write them instead. Borrow or pirate them; you don't even have to finish!

If you are getting your ideas down but don't like how they are written for a reason you can't identify, a common culprit is passive voice.

Dear nonas, what were your OCs doing for Valentine's day? Do they take turns with White Day too?

I didn't used to think much about these holidays, but now I have OCs in confirmed relationships I couldn't help imagining all kinds of things. White Day is actually really useful for returning unexpected gestures or those guys who get competitive with their bf, and for those who aren't living together yet they can sleep over at either home on the different dates. I really like Japan's color schemes for it too. Brown and pink looks really good on some characters, and white and blue has a princely charm. I think I could separate my OCs by who looks best in each, disregard gender roles.

These aren't going to make sense without context from the BL concept thread but: https://pastebin.com/djdQcB7S
Brown&pink - Hiro, Enji, George, Noah, Barardo, Russell, Theodore
White&blue - Murakami, Futoshi, Julian, Rafe, Silvan, Azabel
I never gave the full hair color list on those last guys so that's something to edit later. I'm slightly torn on one or two. It was Russell - red actual cherry n apples red, George - black or blond, Noah - dark pink/magenta, Silvan - turquoise, Theodore - platinum blond like dry grass, Azabel - white with a silver-blue depth, Julian - pale cyan, Rafe - dark gray. (It's messy doing this over two threads but I don't want to spam OC lore before the other BL concepts get seen and discussed.)

>>652
Getting raped

I have hatefucking on the brain right now so my mind wandered and came upon a concept of two fantasy mercenaries and their homoerotic rivalry. You've got a human mage and an axe-wielding warrior with wolf ears and a tail. Initially they meet in a dungeon as they're after the same artifact but the warrior gets there first and is like "Clearly I can crack your skull before you can get a spell off so just accept your defeat. Though I'll give it to you if you suck my dick." thinking the mage would say no and walk away sulking but the mage goes for it even though he finds it humiliating and over time they keep running into each other again and it devolves into a progressively more convoluted series of challenges leading into sexual favors as their dynamic shifts into frenemies cause the mage is a stubborn tsundere who can't back down from a challenge and the wolf warrior is a sadist. The challenges are situations such as "I bet you can't finish this complicated magic incantation while I play with your dick and stimulate your prostate."

>>641
Incredible, I really used the incorrect link. Sorry!
https://justpaste.it/ls/atoqq/o5mfjx2z65yxnqvy

>Mine is just sitting unfinished
Good luck, dude. I have an earlier Jan fic that I sidelined for this one, so it's not all great on my end lmao.

>>536
Thanks so much nonna. Apologies for my delayed response.

Basically I haven't worked on the fic at all since then because I developed a severe anxious reaction to even thinking about it. It's genuinely mental illness. It fucks me up when I remember it's still up there and I accidentally glimpsed a comment asking how I am in my ao3 emails. I get panic attacks over this shit, wtf is wrong with me. I still want to finish it and I still feel an obligation to it/my readers but I'm at a total standstill and shut it out from my mind. I'm in a really bad place

>want to write a story
>have a really good idea of what it's going to be like, can envision it fairly clearly in my mind, along with its key points, character lines, etc.
>except there's two versions
>one is consensual and almost fluffy
>the other is grimdark noncon torture porn
They couldn't be further apart in tone, and I'm almost tempted to write both, but I'm also really lazy and halfway done with the consensual one, so I'll probably just go with it

>>555
>even the adults look like middleschoolers.
I get it if you mean their faces in the manga specifically because everyone looks a lot softer and younger there but come on, almost everyone in that series is absolutely shredded. Just because (most of) the characters aren't 8 heads tall and 70% leg like your average joseimuke guy and have more realistic proportions for their heights doesn't mean they look like middleschoolers.

uhhh wary of this but i don't have much to lose anyway

im willing to rp anything tbh i miss it to much, just b cool and explain what you like so we can find a mutual interest for rp! i reply fast though im not a writer and might disappoint

disc bliss2007
thank u

>>607
just requested u nona!

>>691
ohmygod nona i love them

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arigatou anons!!!

>>696
Also I love your story idea it sounds fucking awesome

>>681
Thank you!

Could i request 2 edited versions? An uncensored edit & a sfw edit.

>>182
I know this is a 2 year old post, so you might not even still be here lol, but i decided to give it a crack anyway because i like griffith. I don't think i did that great of a job replicating the art style, but i figured it's better to post then not i guess.

>>669
Cute!

blue haired faggot with dog?

>>656
Glad you like the idea Nona! I've been thinking and maybe the human character could be a cynical yet friendly guy who has a bias against carnivorous dinos because maybe he almost got killed by one. It could be an interesting conflict if the human ends up having feelings for an aggressive rebellious carnotaurus.

cat x dog furry bl

Omegaverse. The gay bar Channel 46 has a mascot, the tall and elegant omega Shin-chan. A man prone to dazed expressions who has no issue with using the regulars to relieve his heat. It's a small community who all know Shin-chan isn't the type to fall in love, as a former pastor he cares for everyone equally and has trouble seeing kindness as anything special. One evening a newcomer arrives, a well built man of average height named Takashi who recently moved for his work and is looking for a place to unwind. He's immediately taken with Shin-chan's warm welcome, and his eyes can't stop lingering on his long body. He's not the only one, Shin-chan's flock are enthusiastic to discuss all his finest features. They haven't jokingly nicknamed the bar Chapel 4651 for nothing.

There's just one problem: Takashi is an omega, and he feels like he just intruded on someone else's patch. He apologizes and leaves as quick as possible once he realizes, but as the days go by it's clear the other bar patrons remember him and whenever they bump into each other he can think of only one person. The warm scent of a tall and gentle man with no ill intentions. It's such a distraction he can't sleep thinking about it, and the lack of sleep wears on him so bad he fails to keep on top of the workouts that reduce his heat symptoms.

Spiraling into a pheromone relapse he arrives at the bar's door. Who cares if he steals an alpha or two for the night and makes himself hated, it's not like he had a chance with Shin. Only when he knocks it's Shin-chan who opens the door and wraps his arms around him with concern. He feels like he could get down and pray this second. His hips sure are begging for it.

But… what exactly does such a chaste bottom do for another bottom?

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Just a silly idea for an oddball beauty trying to methodically finger someone thick who absolutely requires being filled for medical reasons. Body worship, big titted guy making pleading poses, toy insertion, and ultimately two dudes holding hands while they're railed. Probably wrapped up in a single volume.