No.987
>>986>there's absolutely nothing in character about spontaneous twincestOof nonna, I know this problem as I'm into a twincest ship too right now. That's always a problem with incest ships, which is why the easiest way to get such ships to fuck is usually sex pollen/aphrodisiacs/omegaverse/etc. Most of the fic I've written has been established relationship because I often find the way that people write spontaneous confessions very hard to believe, like it's just an ordinary ship with a little bit more taboo tacked on.
But fight scenes are a great one to get that UST, how about the ever-useful wrestling > boners etc? When there are signs of physical arousal it breaks the ice for you.
No.988
>>987Sameanoning to add a bit more advice: if you're struggling with natural sounding dialogue, focus on actions, and focus on actions that up the intimacy level while still being plausibly deniable as something else. Hair grabbing, clothing damage during the fight leading to skin exposure, holds, everything to do with impaling via weapons, etc. The farther you can get before the characters realise something weird is going on the better. And then when they do realise, maybe they don't want to acknowledge it so they don't say anything.
Another idea you could try is somnophilia -> character wakes up or introducing alcohol, those are also good for facilitating twincest.
No.1058
>>1057Put it in a separate document and save it, you never know when you may need it
No.1059
>>1058Kek, that's actually exactly what I ended up doing.
No.1060
I'm wanting to go dark but I already promised a happy ending, haha.
No.1061
>>1060Extra chapter with secret bad ending?
No.1062
>>1061The secret bad ending is tempting and I really might do it. Thank you for the suggestion.
No.1074
>>1073Kek, I've had this happen to me too. I always wonder what parts did them in, it's a true mystery to me. So what's the fic nona?
No.1084
>>1083Oh, nonna I feel the same way. Its even worse when you get atmospheric ideas and feelings that you can neither describe nor draw.
No.1086
>>1083They can if you invoke the forbidden one… (AI) (this is a joke, not suggestion to actually do it)
No.1087
>>1086Bumping because I've been seeing more fics on AO3 with an "ai assisted" tag, what does that mean? Is it like RPing with character AI to make the story or is it just generating a story and touching it up?
No.1096
>>1095this is fujochan there's gotta be atleast one fujo who is into what you like i'm very curious nonnie
No.1097
>>1095>I am going to write it no matter whatDoing god's work anon.
I also have a bunch of fucked up ideas for fics but no time to write them :(
No.1136
>have specific sexual tastes and fetishes, not exactly rare but somewhat fussy about it
>write terrible pwp smut
>get much better than expected response as a nobody
>yay
>write better porn with similar fetishes, plot, psychology, dynamics etc but with a less popular character, rare pair order, and source material references / spoilers
>slightly weird premise honestly
>less response but still happy. makes complete sense
But now I want to draw out the less popular fic just for myself. I've gotten off to the scenario countless times now, so I can’t be the only weirdo in existence lol
No.1137
>>1136I say go ahead and draw it out! I know it just sounds like a platitude, but you've gotta do what makes yourself happy, even if it doesn't please anyone else sometimes. I've always been surprised though, lots of people have been converted by my weird tastes which is always super humbling lol.
No.1237
>>1236Weave it into something that is actually plotty or you are going to end up with 100k words of nothing. Personal pet peeve: if you do have miscommunication as a plot point, do not drag it out very long.
No.1238
>>1236phew… weeew basically you have to make a relationship develop realistically. Good luck.
Like you are asking about how to be a good writer pretty much, how to give life to some characters, a hinted past, personalities, development. Personally I'm not in the mood to read long things atm but you do you.
No.1239
>get into new fandom
>want to write for new fandom
>get distracted by AU ideas from another fandom
>older fandom idea goes untouched for a year
I have a preference for very specific styles of storytelling and they all lead back to either Greek mythology and/or Dante's Inferno.
No.1255
Have any of you ever intentionally tried to write purple prose? I'm working on a short one-shot featuring two authors and want to include pasaages from one of the stories they're writing but I'm not sure how to get that flowery language down in a way that doesn't sound like shit.
No.1258
>>1255I used to do exercises where I'd pick an image and try to write at least 300 words that embellished on the tone or feeling from it. Something like that might help you get in to the mindset?
No.1262
>>1261IMO lots of porn has unrealistic and flat-out painful looking stuff so as long as you get the emotions down it doesn't really matter if it'd actually get him off.
No.1263
>>1261Where's his dick in this scenario? It'll work for female readers who'll be familiar with rubbing thighs together giving pressure to the vulva, but you might get nitpickers complaining it isn't making dick tip contact or something. If there's rubbing on the tip or his taint (soft skin between the balls and hole) then it can work, especially if he's a repressed sort who's trained himself to idly get off without using his hands. Squeezing the balls might hurt though, not sure how that changes when aroused.
No.1264
>>1261I've never heard of men doing this to get off but would happy to be wrong because it's hot.
>>1263>It'll work for female readers who'll be familiar with rubbing thighs together giving pressure to the vulvaGuilty.
No.1265
>>1261I don't think I've ever heard of or done this but maybe the male equivalent would be pressing the erection against the bed mattress, I've heard from some men that is quite pleasurable.
No.1267
>>1261>>1265I'm not sure either, but this reminded me I came across a manga that had the guy put a pillow between his legs
No.1269
>>1265This makes me want to read a fic where a boy humps the mattress of the boy he likes because it smells of him.
No.1270
>>1269I want to draw my OC humping a giant plushie now because it smells like his crush, but some people think plushhpilia or whatever is mega degenerate
No.1271
Omegaverse South Park fanfic, nothing original.
No.1272
>>1263>Where's his dickHe's still in his pants, lying on his left side in bed, somewhat curled in on himself. I originally had him putting an arm between his legs and just weakly rubbing against it, though. I don't think I'll need to be too worried about nitpicking, I might even be my biggest enemy in that regard, kek.
>>1267A pillow might be good, actually. I'll work it out somehow.
No.1275
>>1271Who's the alpha and who's the omega?
No.1290
>>1289What if they played 7 minutes in heaven at a party at Tolkien's house
kekOn a serious note south park is not an easy fandom to write fanfiction for, I wish you luck nona
No.1291
>>1289I remember when I was watching through the show I was making a list of fanfic ideas although they mostly involved the scenarios turning into molestation. I can't find it but the only one I remember was the Cartmanland episode but Cartman used a chunk of his million dollars to coerce one of his friends to suck his pp
No.1293
>>1291IIRC I don't think that happened in Cartmanland but I don't remember that episode too well. I think you're mixing it up with Cartman Sucks, where Cartman tries to trick Butters into oral. If that's what you're reffering to, then yes that's the ship I'm writing about
>>1290It used to be more rabid circa 2021 and 2023 when random zoomers who had never even seen the show startes enforcing their own fandom rules and bullshit on everyone, but it definitley has always been bad. Thank you for the luck!
No.1294
>>1293I mean that was my idea for a fanfic where the plot of the episode takes a molesty turn, ik it didn't actually happen
No.1295
>>1294Oops, sorry nonnie, my ESL took over and I misread your reply. I like that idea a lot actually, and I'd be interested in reading a fic with it. I'm not totally sure whether I want to return to writing fics with a smut fic or a fluff.
No.1301
>>937This is probably the most deranged way to put it, but. Rorschach is like that in a decent amount of decent watchmen fanfics
No.1302
It's taking such a long time, but I'm writing wet and messy food play sex for my otp. It's supposed to be super lighthearted, but maybe because the source material is so depressing, i feel the wip has a slightly angsty undertone to it. But it's fun so far. Apparently wet and messy stuff makes people stand face-to-face with the deepest reaches of their own shame, so I'm really enjoying dissecting my otp like 2 little frogs covered in cake and sprinkles. Also playing a bit with the dynamic set by the source material, too.