/oc/ - Original Creation

>>1430
Kissing Vincent, Allendale pulled down his trousers and tossed them aside. His body demanded he continue to lock lips, twist tongues, and taste every bit of that gorgeous man, but his mind screamed to pull away and lay down the rules. A simple confession did not fix a decade of misery and ostracization. Those vitriolic words Vincent had spewed could never be forgotten, and perhaps never taken back. Once said, the acid took hold and slowly melted all of Daniel’s defenses and corroded his heart and soul. Mending it would take years of trust and work, and once repaired, the scars would still remain, open and bare, pieces missing and uneven. Its shape never what it once was.

“And it doesn’t mean our marriage is saved either.”

Vincent parted Daniel’s robe and buried his face between his chest. "I'll give you a reason to stay.”

“Sex isn’t a reason.” Daniel moaned.

“However many it takes.” His tongue licked along his husband’s torso, stopping at the hem of the underwear. Yanking it off, Vincent grasped the hard, weeping dick and swallowed it without warning.

“Ah, Vincent, wait!” Allendale clenched his fingers into Vincent’s curls, lifting his head from his groin.

Vincent smacked the hand away and pinned Daniel’s hips down, pressing his head further down. Given how long it had been since Daniel had been with another man - namely him, it would not be long before he came, writhing, crying, and beautiful.

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>>1431
Vincent pulled away with an intentionally loud pop, kissing the softening member for good measure. He stuck out his tongue to show his husband the fruit of his labor. Thick and copious, musty and unpleasant, Vincent swallowed Daniel’s semen with gusto, relishing the unamused expression on Daniel’s face. It had always freaked him out whenever he swallowed. Some things never change.

A delectable sight, a feast for the eyes! Daniel laying, quivering from the intense orgasm, sensitive and overstimulated. One touch could send him coming again, shouting how it had been too much too soon. Vincent crawled over his body and hovered over his chest, his cock begging for attention and release. Licking his lips, Vincent used one hand for himself and one to reach around from behind and play with Daniel’s spent dick.

Allendale squirmed from the touch, eyes fixated on that fat, glistening cock. His mouth salivated. “Cut it out.”

“No,” he said breathlessly.

“I meant stop touching my dick, idiot.” Allendale snatched Vincent’s wrist and took it away from his crotch. “Give it some time, will you?”

Vincent chuckled, moving his knees upwards to bring his cock closer to Daniel’s face. “Can’t bounce back up like you used to?”

“We’re not twenty anymore, Vincent.” He took Vincent’s idle hand and placed it on his shoulder for better leverage. This may have been a one night stand, but he still wanted his former lover to have fun. Reaching to Vincent’s dick, he used his left to help jerk him off and the right hand to fondle his balls and press a knuckle hard into his taint.

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>>1432
Allendale bit his lips. The thrill of seeing that perfectly sculpted man come undone by his touch and words, the moans and small twitches with the twist of his fingers, calloused palms from manual labor contrasting and massaging the delicate flesh mixing with Vincent’s own soft, manicured hands, nothing could compare! How wonderful it had been to see that man’s ears inflamed with red by the utter filth said only to have them spat back with more vigor and lust.

“Do it,” said Allendale, knuckling along the perineum. Vincent’s moan stirred his flaccid penis back to life. “Cum all over me.”

“I’ll do that and more, my love. The only place you belong is our bedroom, naked and with your ass gaping from all the times I fucked you. You’d like that, wouldn’t you? Just being a cozy housewife doing absolutely nothing except staying pretty and keeping your legs open for your husband while I slave away, bringing home the money you demand.”

“You say that but you forget how much to crave getting fucked.” A finger teased and rubbed into Vincent’s hole. “I’ll be spoiled in the day, but at night I’ll do all the work filling your arse with cum.”

Vincent shivered, almost losing his balance. “And I will get that fill any time I want. You can fuck me until I go blind but I will make sure you never have an excuse to ever leave me."

He squeezed Vincent's dick harder, noting the shallow and fast breaths and thrusts. "You have an insurmountable amount of work to get to that point."

"However long it takes, you will be mine, Daniel."

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>>1424
That could be a cool hidden twist ending: it turns out the demon apparition is actually real and the MC gets to become a prince of Hell or something.

Im gonna start writing this nonnies wish me luck.

>>1427
I was thinking the same thing. Bride of the demon that had been making his schizophrenia worse and raped him all the time in the mad house

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This is definitely an advanced sewing project, but with enough gumption and patience, anyone can do it!

>>1416
That does look like someone's old school OTP.
Saving the link in case I make a stuffed body for an air dry clay head… some day. The textile head is a little uncanny.

>>1126
hey, it seems that links are expired and it gives 404 error so could you please share it once more

>>1100
Thank you nonna, these are very useful! finally, I will get around drawing my latest OC getting molested in adequate and numerous ways

Man, I try to keep positive, but lately I felt very disappointed in my skill. I feel like I'll never be as good as I want to be, so why even bother? I know it's just a passing feeling, but it's hard to be optimistic in the face of it. I'm just digitally surrounded by out of this world artists.

>>1374
I'm honored
>>1376
Thank you, nonnie. It makes me so happy to read this.
>I'm anticipating seeing how the Daniel/Kyle stuff gets wrapped up (and more Daniel in general) and Kyman getting together
The next chapter has been taking me forever to write. It's one of the first I've come up with in my head, which is about how Kyle met Daniel, and then how they got together. I just need to cut it down because it's so damn long.
>Also, do you have any idea on how many chapters you're planning for this series or just writing as you go?
I'd say it's 1/3 done. So, maybe it should take me another 14-15 chapters to wrap it up.

>>1377
Took me an extra day to get around to it but I love it so much, your characterization is excellent and a lot of the emotional lines, especially about Kyle's self-hatred and anxiety hit really hard and well. I'm super excited for the next chapter to see more groomer lore

>>1383
Thanks, nonners! I hope I don't disappoint with the new chapter. I was worried the angsty teen rants missed the mark, but I'm glad you think they “hit hard”.

>>1386
Is it? What media do you have in mind?

>>1386
I think that despite anime and japanese games having become mainstream by now there's still a lot of westerners stuck in the mindset that they have to be ironic about liking japanese things because deep down they still think that people who like anime are degenerates and they don't want to be associated with that.

>>1385
>I could be talking out my ass because I didn't bother verifying it, but I can see an increase of these with the rise of people vibe coding
This is definitely happening, but even before current AI most game platforms were filled with low effort porn games, most using stock realistic 3D models. I would guess that it's now easier to make anime style 2D hentai games specifically due to the ease of generating art. The stuff that was on the top rated page on itch specifically looked at least hand drawn, probably there since before porn game monetization was removed. There's also still more yandere stuff on that page than hentai though kek.
>>1386
Part of it is westerners making baby's first VN feel like they need to be clever and subvert tropes when they may have never even read a VN before themselves, and then add on people specifically feeling like they need to subvert 'toxic BL' tropes.
But there is definitely more genuine stuff that's just like a standard BLVN than it seems, it's just that the meme games are the only ones that blow up into mainstream.

>>1283
I usually bypass that entirely by mentioning the character speaks with a specific accent and then take time to incorporate specific slang or other characteristics. The important thing is just to not write it out phonetically.

> "Let's go to the general store."
> "Le's go t' the general store."

It's a slightly exaggerated example, but when it comes to writing like this, phonetic writing like the second line is unnecessary because the characters are still speaking all the same words as the first. They're just pronounced differently. But just like Americans and Canadians pronounce "sorry" slightly differently ("sarree" vs "sorree"), we don't spell it differently as "sorree" when a Canadian says it, because it's the same word.
But incorporating local slang usually gets the point across well. When I read a line like this
> "Sorry but I ain't gonna do that, bud."
As a Canadian, I can't not read it in a Canadian accent Especially if you happened to mention he was Canadian beforehand.

>>1284
Ah thank you for the insight, I think one of the things that I struggle with is that when I read I don't hear the character voices in my head, so even if I'm told "This character is x" that doesn't reflect in my reading of the dialogue. I think I'm going to try to look for some regional slang to compensate then.

>>1283
So many out there!
http://www.rinkworks.com/dialect
https://mr-dialect.com/en-gb/translator

I've been writing OC twincestslop for a couple years now. It's getting long but I thought I might as well share it
https://archiveofourown.org/works/54340555/chapters/137633368

>>1340
I read a few chapters and I’m hooked nona. It reminded me a lot of yana toboso’s twincest comic picrel. It also reminded me of a twincest/dadson story I was working on years ago until I realized I was just writing devil may cry fanfic with the serial numbers filed off kek!
You really have a way of writing mental illness nona, I was diagnosing the characters with personality disorders every chance I got. Also, don’t get mad but as much as I love twincest I kind of wanted Mark to get with the streamer bf kek!

>>1342
Thank you so much for giving it a read nona! I'm very curious to see what you diagnosed them with, I wonder if it matches what I intended
Also it's a tragedy you stopped working on that twincest/dadson story, I would've loved to read it. Sometimes I write crackfic about my twin OCs having a threesome with their dad but through the lens of another character with a dadson fixation meeting them and fantasizing about it kek

>>1333
SOVL as hell! You got it down pat anon

>>1333
This really does look like it was yanked from a VN, good job.

>>1333
not very sluggy but very cute and well done