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Thread for creating BL concepts.
Got an appealing idea for a new BL? Post em
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 No.1106

I've got this idea: a tough guy–japanese SWAT (which has like, almost no publicly available information, btw), outwardly he's really macho, tall, muscular, etc, but he loves girly fashion (liz lisa, axes femme, honey, etc), and like, sanrio. He's nice and gentle in his personality, despite his appearance.
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A short, cute, effete guy, who comes across as sweet and softspoken. Maybe he's a teacher or works in a cafe? But under the surface, he's a gruff asshole who's into outdoorsy stuff and guns.
I love opposites attract stories and niche japanese fashion subcultures. No idea whatsoever how a story about them would play out, so I'll need to workshop that, but its a start!

 No.1108

I like the whole "I got reincarnated into a character of this book/game" concept, something like SVSS or I'm In Love With the Villainess. But the problem for me with those types of story is the love interest being a fictional character, it feels a bit fake to ship them with a real person, like the relationship lacks depth. So then I was imagining a story where both the MC and love interest are real people sucked into the fictional world somehow. The MC gets reincarnated as the villain and he finds that a troublesome guy he knew in his old world is the hero(could also be vice-versa). The MC just wants to either go back or live peacefully, but the other guy is an idiot chuunibyou type who gets really into being the character and starts trying to pull some isekai protag BS and the MC has to run around getting him out of trouble.

As for their personalities, I imagine the MC as an unpopular loner, but a chill quiet one, not an incel type. As for the love interest, he has friends but he is basically the punching bag of his friend group, like the guy they keep around just to make fun of and only pretend to like. The MC is kind-hearted and feels empathy for the LI even though he's annoying and helps him out but the LI is a dick to him. Eventually though they get closer, MC saves LI from dying or something and he gradually falls in love with him+lets down his defenses and starts being more genuine. It could end either with them both going back to their IRL lives but having each other now, or leading a new life together in the game world. Not too sure on the relationship between the two pre-isekai, could be something like estranged childhood friends maybe.

 No.1109

>>1108
I love chuuni characters so much this is good

 No.1110

>>1108
>Eventually though they get closer, MC saves LI from dying or something and he gradually falls in love with him+lets down his defenses and starts being more genuine.
Nona, it's written in law that this has to start happening with the idiot chuuni thinking it's the actual villain character warming up to him and having weird ideas about it. Maybe he decides he can neutralize the villain's threat by baiting him into a "friendship". Maybe he keeps second guessing kind actions as a trap, he only rescued me because he intends to use me for [absurd thing MC never thought of]. Maybe MC starts worrying that he's actually doting on the LI at this point and is getting too involved in his well being, and tries to act colder but can't help it. "I love him like the neighbor's puppy who kept getting himself tied up in his own rope in the yard, that's all, it's nothing more than that!" And then [major plot event from the original story] forces them to something something and conversations have to happen.
>"You were trying to trick me so you could steal the holy relic and corrupt it for your dastardly purposes, since you've always despised the holy order!!"
>"If you would stop yapping, and just-! STOP. Right there. Your cloak's stuck in the door, how on earth do you manage to lead any knight guard like this…"

I just. Love stupid shit.

 No.1113

Nonas, is it more interesting if a character loses an arm that has self harm scars, or if he loses the non-harmed arm instead? I am workshopping an idea, and without getting into too many details, the character in question is military and keeps a guilt tally of the people who he has killed. At some point he needs to lose an arm, and I don't know which one would be more tragic: if he loses the tally/guilt arm, then he's lost the only way he remembers the lives he's taken, and if he loses the other arm, then he only has the injured one left. I feel like the obvious answer is the tally arm, but wanted an external opinion.

 No.1114

>>1113
He should lose the tally arm; it's more meaningful, and can also pivot into a metaphor about forgiveness or something along those lines.

 No.1116

>>1102
Alienfag here, thank you! I'm imaging the alien trying to impregnate the uke over and over again and but not wanting to abandon him as a mate kek there needs to be eggs

 No.1117

>>1113
Which is his dominant hand? Losing his dominant hand is the greater reminder of everything he's lost. Even if it's not the tally arm, it means he has to turn to his tally arm to do things he used to be able to ignore it during.

 No.1118

>>1117
ayrt, his dominant arm is the non-scarred arm. I was leaning more towards that, considering that I think it's more interesting and has larger angst potential also its an easy excuse for a sex scene lmao if his opposite has to help him shave etc, then I can easily lead that into a handjob. Also, logistically, I think dominant arms get broken more often because they're used more often.

 No.1139

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The plot of the M3GAN movies but BL. A cute boy doll AI obsessing over a cute (older than the girl in the movies) guy he is programmed to bond with.

 No.1140

>>1139
That is such a cute idea nonna! Bonus if you lean into cute j-fashion for the outfits!

 No.1143

I was toying with this idea of some sort of power imbalance in the 1890s between some Earl or something and his assistant. I do love me my age gaps and late Victorian stylings, and it would be very interesting (going off some discussion from a few months ago on here), if the seme could still seme without actually fucking the uke. The only real ideas I have thus far are the seme making the uke use a glory hole (as in, move his hips forward) and ye olde sybian.

But, like visions of sugarplums, visions of yaois are dancing through my head.

 No.1175

I once read a Touken ranbu fic where the author's note went something like "I have a degree in japanese history and used it to write historically accurate samurai porn." I still think about it sometimes and as someone who enjoys spooky religious themes it would be fun if one day I can say that I made a BL story set in a 14th century european monastery (Or something along those lines) that would be historically accurate.

 No.1176

>>1175
I have a casual interest in history and I crave this constantly. Even if its just the clothes that are right, I'd be ecstatic. I have never once in my entire life seen hose mentioned in any historical fic or otherwise.

 No.1178

I found this article of a tiger and goat becoming friends and now I want a BL version. Maybe it could use designs that shapeshift between human and animal like Tora wa Ryuu wo Mada Tabenai?
>Goat is released into tiger’s enclosure for feeding
>Because the tiger was never taught to hunt and the goat defends himself, the tiger relents and leaves him alone
>They avoid each other at first, but over time start playing and sleeping with each other
>A fight breaks out between them. The goat is forced to move to a different enclosure and dies after a few days (grief??)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amur_and_Timur

 No.1179

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>>1178
I don't think it fits the premise you have in mind, but there's this manhwa of an assertive sheep and a timid tiger

 No.1187

I had an idea for some sort of fairytale analouge, maybe a take on the lindworm or a werewolf or something. I'd love to try and design a monster boy without leaning too heavily on cliche, ie, wolf ears and tail. I guess it's a question of how to subtly incorporate monster features onto a normal man.

 No.1230

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I really want more BL in medical settings with caretaker x patient. Or two males in a mental asylum / recovery program like the BL equivalent of Girl, Interrupted. I almost wish FC had a way of collaborating on art and stories together kek.

 No.1231

>>1230
Maybe a round robin or big bang? set up a burner discord or protonmail?

 No.1232

Attractive straight men get abducted by a terrorist organization who puts them into camps. There they are brainwashed and given medicine which turns them gay. Our protagonist was once a straight young man but now has to fight off his homolust as he tries to escape the gay camp.

 No.1233

>>1230
seconded. I love medical settings

 No.1234

>>1232
Men don't need any meds to turn gay in prison.

 No.1235

>>1234
I want a straight dude to be forcibly converted into being gay and get unwanted gay thoughts kek

 No.1242

>>1230
Nona, idk if you'll see this, but there's a Taiwanese (? I'm assuming Taiwanese BL authors can show explicit sex vs Chinese ones) webtoon called Moretones that sorta fills this niche. But, YMMV because it has a lot of rape in it between the caretaker (the older uke) and the patient (younger seme) and they first met when the seme was very young. They're "cousins" but I'm pretty sure they aren't actually related. It's a wild ride and I was bewildered everytime I tried reading it.

 No.1243

>>1242
thank you!

 No.1286

Reiwa Hanamaru style all male setting but it's set in a big mansion and follows the maid staff who gossip and spy on the lives of the master of the house and his visitors.

 No.1349

I have a few concepts but one I've been bouncing around in my head is a visual novel where you play as a seme university professor and prey on a selection of 3 uke students. Potentially there can be a 4th love interest who's another professor for variety. I just wanted a seme pov vn

 No.1350

>>1349
Sounds very PROBLEMATIC. I'd love it.

 No.1352

>>1349
Begging you to make the starting points for relationships something like "this student gets bad grades so he wants to seduce you as bribery", "this student is way too good I should reward him", "most oblivious hardworking student I've ever had, how long until he notices what I'm doing". The secret professor option could have cameos in other routes either as a rival for the students or threatening to expose the MC. "Fuck someone on your own level" - what, like another professor?

Sorry I'm running with this but I'd explain him risking his decade+ career actively picking out students because he's had a terminal cancer diagnosis he hasn't told anyone about and fuck it why not go down in flames like the slut he never got to be. Dad will have a great time at the funeral. End of the game he gets a call saying it was a false flag while lying in bed with someone. Worse he could be cockwarming and realize he's "in too deep" bahahaha.

 No.1353

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>>1352
Thanks for the wonderful ideas, I'd love to incorporate these. I had a few vague ideas for love interests so far:
-The good boy with good grades. The professor catches him cheating. He doesn't usually cheat but he felt desperate because something in his life got in the way of his studies and he wanted to maintain his perfect grades. Blackmail ensues.
-The delinquent with bad grades. I actually had a similar idea to you, where it's like you said, he wants to seduce as a bribery. He's also just a slut in general
-The weird loser with school shooter vibes. I've been thinking he was obsessed with MC for a while for some reason, maybe he just got attached because of MC's surface-level kindness when he was really lonely. His obsessive tendencies prove to be a problem and he's obviously clingy in a way that'll get MC in trouble so MC has to pacify him and give him attention without getting in trouble himself

I love your ideas for the secret professor route, I wasn't sure how it would go but a rival you have to watch out for would add such a cool layer to the game. I think he could function both as a rival or someone threatening to expose the MC. I'm having a hard time determining if the other professor is also going for students or if he's actually a moral character who wants to protect them from MC. Maybe he could pretend to have morals while secretly wanting to get MC in trouble so he can have the ukes to himself kek

The cancer thing makes for a super interesting twist at the end, I was thinking MC just got into this career in the first place with the goal of having power of others to find people to take advantage of because he's just that kind of sick person. I was actually thinking he'd been preying on students for a while, it's just he hasn't been caught yet. The inciting incident at the start of the game would be that his recent victim had killed himself and MC wants a new toy to replace him with.

Ok I ended up typing quite a bit, thanks for inspiring me to think of this again in more detail. Maybe I'll make some mspaint mock-ups of some character designs, I need to practice art more if I want to make this too. I think an under-developed artstyle is the big thing holding me back.

 No.1354

>>1353
I like your ideas so far nonna, I hope it can come to fruition someday!

 No.1355

>>1353
I wish you the best! can't wait to draw some fanart if you ever post their designs ♡

 No.1356

>>1353
Maybe the other professor could be a student teacher or something? Although, I'm very fond of older ukes…

 No.1360

>>1353
I love your outline idea, nonna!
>mspaint mock-ups
Fingers crossed we get to see them some time.
>>1352
> he's in too deep
Perfection.

I immediately envisionned the comedy angle now that's where I've lately been in too deep kek so here's a little something I thought of when I read your love interest profiles
>good boy with good grades
MC : Oh, I love tormenting non-problematic students. If only he stopped yapping about wanting me to grade his performance when I fuck him. He ain't getting shit when he still owes me for keeping my mouth shut!
>delinquent with bad grades
MC : What a whore, he's gonna need more extracurricular courses to fix the mess I keep seeing in his papers and on his face. Yes, keep devouring me with these eyes. He might not be as desperate of a case as I thought.
>weird loser with school shooter vibes
MC : I swear to god if he spouts one more joke about me executing the evil demon in his ass, I will kill him with my bare hands. Or not. He's quite cute when he sulks and pretends he's angry, but again at what cost.

 No.1361

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>>1353
Interesting concept nonna, i tried sketching 2 of them based on how i think they could look like
Not sure if i made them look too old tho…

 No.1362

>>1361
NTA, cute artstyle!

 No.1363

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>>1230
same anon here but i foind out there was a gay play starring keanus reeves in an insane asylum called wolfboy
https://prettydudesweb.com/the-latest/f/pretty-dudes-hall-of-fame-keanu-reeves-in-wolfboy

 No.1407

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I have no idea if this really fits in here (maybe a bit too /ex/?) but an experience at work this week really got me into the idea of vasectomies which transitioned into outright (chemical) castration today. Maybe some solider/knight gets captured by an opposing nation, and the leader/captain of the enemy fighters ends up falling in love with him, but the captured dude is just too aggressive and genuinely can not be managed easily. So, the guy holding him captive just goes on and (chemically/magically, can not stress this enough KEK) castrates him. The captive guy is horrified and livid about it but ultimately he still ends up growing way more docile and agreeable, and eventually that leads to them ending up """happy""" together. I like big/muscular bottoms too so in this case I also like the idea of him retaining the physical capability of fighting back but gradually losing the actual drive to try and do so and not being able to do anything about it. It'd have a lot of focus on the psychological aspect, I think. The top would otherwise be very kind/considerate (doesn't even try and force anything sexual, just light, affectionate acts of touching) and the bottom is slowly going insane because he's starting to warm up to the guy who is behind many of the miserable, violent deaths of his fellow countrymen/fighters. Would be very dark in tone overall.

 No.1415

Psych ward BL VN with the LIs being other patients, the psychiatrist, and an orderly.

 No.1418

>>1415
What would the story be and what would the mc be in the ward for? I can think of a few patient archetypes.

 No.1419

>>1418
Can we have the one that's secretly a cannibal?

 No.1420

>>1419
Sure. Maybe the other patients can all be modeled after different personality clusters. A scizo weirdo, a bippie, and then an anxious mess.

 No.1421

>>1420
I was also thinking that one of the LIs could be the MCs schizo hallucination.

 No.1422

>>1421
Yes! Awesome. FC-made BLVN in the psych ward, I'm so down. I would love for the MC to have mommy issues. Maybe the MC thinks he's in the psych ward for self-harm but really he killed people or some twist like that. I have to think about a better potential twist / story that's less predictable.

 No.1423

>>1421
I'd love this plotline so much. Would be cool foreshadowing that the schizo hallucination wasn't talking to anyone else. I wonder if this LI would be an imaginary friend type hallucination or a bad influence

 No.1424

>>1423
The literal demon apparition the schizo MC hallucinates and swears is real

 No.1426

I have an urge to ms paint doodle out character concepts for this >>1415
>>1424
so it would look like a literal demon as the mc hallucinates getting raped and swears up and down he can't be gay and has a mental breakdown perhaps

I also want an ending where the mc age-regresses after being mentally broken

 No.1427

>>1424
That could be a cool hidden twist ending: it turns out the demon apparition is actually real and the MC gets to become a prince of Hell or something.

 No.1428

Im gonna start writing this nonnies wish me luck.

 No.1429

>>1427
I was thinking the same thing. Bride of the demon that had been making his schizophrenia worse and raped him all the time in the mad house



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